Friendship Patrol 01

Despite the few misgivings you yourself commented on, I think this is a good piece so far, Aphex. The detail on all the security cameras, microphones, and other equipment set around Scootaloo is impressive, with the subtle variations helping to keep things interesting, although perhaps a little more variety in the type of equipment could help things. The wires draped around her neck and shoulders makes an almost noose-like image, giving the piece a somewhat dark undertone. I think the glitch design in the background is a bit typical, but still effective as it serves to balance out the foreground design's strong vertical emphasis with its own horizontal emphasis. Perhaps the colors used could be changed to fit better with that "dark undertone" mentioned previously. Even if you do make some changes to it, I'd say it's still something that benefits the piece overall.